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Open Minded by teygrim Open Minded by teygrim
When Luna asked Twilight if she would like to watch her raise the moon, Twilight didn't realise that the moon princess was asking her out on a date; especially when Celestia decided to tag along. After watching Luna fulfil her spectacular duty, an excited Twilight asked the princess hundreds of question. Luna was all too happy to answer with hint of pride.

After a while, there was a moment of silence as Twilight gazed at the moon and the stars while Luna gazed at Twilight. And, before Twilight realised what was happening, Luna's lips were pressed against her own.

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I've always thought of Twilight as straight but I think the shipping of her and Luna is adorable so I made this comic as a joke.
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:iconrautamiekka:
rautamiekka Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Student Artist
Man, Celestia, seriously, I don't know if you're being a dick or a troll, the scales keep on going back and forth.
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:iconmexmistli:
mexmistli Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Student Writer
I LOVE THIS LUNA
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:iconalialena:
alialena Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2016
I got serious writer's block but here it is!
www.fimfiction.net/story/22427…
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teygrim Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2016
Wow, you're a pretty good writer. This story is adorable! But, to be honest, I think it would have been better if it weren't a sequel to my comic. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE it when people are inspired by my work, but Celestia's threat felt inconsistent with the light-hearted tone you created. I just think that the story would have been stronger if you left Celestia out of it. Instead, you could have just had Twilight being so scared of hurting Luna's feelings that she goes to these ridiculous lengths to spare them. By just changing this one detail, the story would have been more absurd (though consistent with Twilight's personality, as we've seen in "Lesson Zero") and, consequently, more funny. I'm glad that you were inspired by my comic, but I think that your determination to make your story a sequel to this comic may have held you back (in fact, I wonder if this restriction you imposed on yourself contributed to your writer's block).

Sorry for being so critical. I really DID like the story. I only criticize because I think you have talent. If I didn't, I would bother.
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alialena Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2016
It may, in fact, have contributed to not getting this story done in forever. I am however thrilled that you enjoyed it!
Also, thank you for complimenting my writing. I may be preening a bit right now!
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AspiePie Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2015  Student General Artist
I want my bother to do that for me!
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:iconuniqueskd:
UniqueSKD Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2016
You want your brother to try and kiss your cheek?
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:iconudeadmonkey9:
Udeadmonkey9 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2015
Princess Celestia Awe Plz one thing twi
Twilight (Happy) Plz yes
Princess Celestia Angry Plz break her heart and ill break your spine
Twilight (Crying 2) Plz ok.......
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:iconblackwidow1001:
BlackWidow1001 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2016   Digital Artist
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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:icondavis78:
davis78 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015
yup.....this is mlp,
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:iconskyilere:
Skyilere Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They're both females. -.-
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:iconstickygum:
StickyGum Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, Lebians Exsist You Know...
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:iconskyilere:
Skyilere Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lebians.
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:iconstickygum:
StickyGum Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I Forgot The S....
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:iconskyilere:
Skyilere Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Add it bak. :3
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:iconvoid-af:
void-af Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love your comics so your humour! XD
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:iconmadkrayzypony:
madkrayzypony Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How that rhyme went?

Break her heart, I'll break yer back? Step over the line and I'll break yer fukin spine!:iconfluttersqueeplz:
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:iconthewolflamb:
TheWolfLamb Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Trollestia 
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:icongwduncan:
GwDuncan Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
That line was from Shanghai Nights!
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:iconcheesycheeseocheese:
CheesycheeseoCheese Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Student
XD
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:iconforeststarstudios:
ForestStarStudios Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:trollestia3plz:
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:iconapplegloom1928:
AppleGloom1928 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015
:icontrollestia3plz:
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:iconapplegloom1928:
AppleGloom1928 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015
u forgot the word icon
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:iconforeststarstudios:
ForestStarStudios Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, thanks for correcting me :3
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:iconpsycho3121:
Psycho3121 Featured By Owner Edited Feb 26, 2015
Love is everywhere xD
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:iconladyblackbird13:
ladyblackbird13 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This. Is. AWESOME!
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:iconmegamushroom64:
megamushroom64 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015
Celestia's expression and the way she says it is what imo makes this image perfect XD
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:iconarticunos-bitch:
Articunos-Bitch Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
TwiLuna has always been a great ship. She can make Twilight happy.
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:icongersuperman:
GERsuperMAN Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Da fuck
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:iconask-----cinderheart:
Ask-----cinderheart Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH 
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:iconlunathebrohomie:
lunathebrohomie Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014
holy SH*T celestia really doesn't want her sister heart to be broken
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sophie123456789a Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Student Photographer
Twi And Luna : Huggle! Hug :3 XD
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:iconcandythekat:
CandyTheKat Featured By Owner Edited Aug 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yay
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:iconsweetlolitakairi:
SweetLolitaKairi Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student General Artist
can you ship me and luna instead? :3 hahahaa~ :heart: this is awesome ^3^
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:icongersuperman:
GERsuperMAN Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No dont ship him with luna, i am a better option to be with luna :P
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:iconsweetlolitakairi:
SweetLolitaKairi Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Nuuu I like Luna more!
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:icongersuperman:
GERsuperMAN Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love luna the most! ^.^
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:iconsweetlolitakairi:
SweetLolitaKairi Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Well I care for her well being The most~~
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:icongersuperman:
GERsuperMAN Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you care for her heath Then you are her royal doctor lol... i care and love for her and herself alone, so i win
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:iconsweetlolitakairi:
SweetLolitaKairi Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Student General Artist
I care about her health. Besides, why don't we just let her decide between her millIons of fans~
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:icongersuperman:
GERsuperMAN Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol but nopony is worth her hoof
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:iconecliptorcalrissian:
EcliptorCalrissian Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Ah, true love!
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:iconstar-von-alicorn:
Star-Von-Alicorn Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Trollestia... or is it?
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:icontawog11:
tawog11 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
TIARAWHY NO!!! NO....NO.....NO.............Go ahead!
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:iconpencil1x:
Pencil1X Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
Oh me, oh my... LET THE FLOODGATES BE OPENED! 
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:iconsturmlion1:
Sturmlion1 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
And much fun was had and a back remained unbroken.
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:iconsuperzorthax:
superZorthax Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That would have been believable if it wasn't someone Celestia knew. :\
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:iconvertorm:
Vertorm Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
I love this. xD
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:icondragonfua11:
DragonFUA11 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
heh heh heh
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